College Composition Week Five

This week in composition is learning the different types of writing styles. The styles are all different and can be taken in a different approach for each one. The things that still have me confused are writing a strong thesis and making sure that the writing is on the right track. The points of the thesis is suppose to show what will be explained in the paper throughout. So in writing this paper we are suppose to have an introduction, first point, second point, third point, and a conclusion. The things that I think about is having a strong introduction and then the other paragraphs should follow those three points from the thesis and must argue what needs to be done. These are often supplied with facts that will support the ideas and then what needs to be done to correct the problems or causes. For example in writing about alcohol and young people the three points are the eating disorders, substance abuse and suicide. According to the research that has been performed all young people suffer from these three things in consuming alcohol. In reading a article on eating disorders showed what the effects are and what causes them and supports them with facts about the eating disorders. Then in the second point as to substance abuse is when young people are drinking alcohol they often uses substances that are harmful when consuming alcohol. Finally in the third point about suicide is often when young people consume alochol and use things such as substance in illegal drugs then both of those combined often leads young people to committing suicide. If any one has any suggestions please let me know and please leave me feedback.